Evaluation Of Pitch

We presented our 25 word pitch to our class (of which some people fit into our target audience) and attained some feedback.

One person asked: "Is that a poly tunnel?" regarding one of our location ideas which was answered as a swimming pool. We were then asked whether the swimming pool was part of the idea of outdoors, fun and festivals. As we have chosen our music video to show disjuncture and abstract shots we believe this to be quite an ideal place to take some shots.

We were asked why disjuncture may be the way forward for our band's music video instead of a performance-type video. We believe that it is quite typical and conventional of the indie/alternative genre to use disjuncture in their videos and create a happy/playful atmosphere that matches the tempo of the song which helps to make the video more memorable and fulfill its purpose of marketing and advertising the band and giving them recognition.

Overall, i think that the pitch covers most of the questions that people would like to ask and i think that our ideas are quite concise and clear, therefore easy to understand. I do not think that there were any issues raised that we were not aware of and if we were to perform this pitch again, we wouldn't say that it was "easier" to do disjuncture as it comes across as we are going for the easier option - but that is not the case.

 Overall, i think that we worked well as a team and i also think that our pitch was successful and i'm happy with how it went.