This is my final draft of my album cover; I was given feedback to fill the whole circle of the person running as it creates the illusion that the black object is in the middle and he is running around it. I really like this finished version but will happily receive more feedback to improve it even further.
UPDATE: After receiving feedback as a comment on this post I have updated the image with the suggested alterations; I now like my creation even more and think the perspective adds so much to the picture.
Jess. This will be brilliant, you just need to pay attention to perspective. The top of the monolith shouldn't be that visible, at the minute it looks like it leans forward too much. Perhaps make your brother smaller and closer to the shape just like the Automatic.
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Much better Jess. This is now more like the work of Storm Thorgeson.
ReplyDeleteI still reckon your brother needs to be closer to the object in order to make it more sinister and creepy. At the minute he is too far away and draws the eye away from the shape.
Thanks, I'll work on that in the lesson tomorrow ! I also have some mock-ups of other locations with the black block in.
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