Analysis Of The Feedback Received Regarding Our Music Video

After we had created our draft music video, we received feedback from both Mr. Smith and Mrs. Abrahamson:

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After receiving the lengthy feedback from Mr. Smith, we used and did not use some  parts of his advice. I will talk through the points he has made and tell you the changes we have made with regards to his feedback.

1. We changed our video so that the band are playing in the lead up to the lead singer saying "oh, language is dead". However, some clips were deleted from memory sticks unintentionally and so we no longer had the new clip, so we had to fill up the space with other clips.
2. We have attained on-the-beat editing in the first opening seconds.
3. Singer is now singing and opening his mouth more.
4. No need for improvement.
5. We have used spots on the floor to ensure band members are in the same place when we are filming them.
6. We have changed the acoustic guitar for an electric guitar.
7. We tried this, but it does not work at all, as we cannot re-film a part that was unintentionally filmed  as it does not look natural like the draft version.
8. 51 seconds was used as another shot for the draft did not work - so we have changed that.
9. We have done this.
10. We have cut down on the hula and hawaiian, although it is still in the video.
11. We have adapted our original idea so that it seems more fun and genuine.
12. We will use this idea.
13. We are keeping the strobe lighting scene as we have tweeted the little comets and they said "The bit with the iPhone lighting is class".
14. We have used the idea of a trail of chalk.
15. We have cut back to the singer by using more of the boat scene.
16. We have developed the forest scene sufficiently.
17. The faked darkness was only for the draft to show where we intended to use 'night-time' shots.
18. We have given the band members cocoa. (Much against our own will).
19. We have tried to make our idea clearer that they are making shadow puppets that are clear to see from the inside and the outside, not people scaring them - so we have tried to make that a bit easier to understand for the audience.
20. Read and understood, captain.
21. We have changed the sleeping in the car to another shot from another scene that we have re-filmed.
22. We have done this - band members go out of the shot one by one as they finish playing their instruments.