This is just in brief the feedback I recieved from both of my teachers. Keeping it this simple allows me to understand exactly what I need to change in order to get the best results possible.
Digipak
-The front cover is excellent.-Panels with repeated skeleton needs changing.
-Put ZED on poster.
-Go for black spine not grey.
-Put ZED on poster.
-Go for black spine not grey.
3-4/10 D
Poster
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6/10 Top C to top ANice.
-Perhaps use 4 times Skeleton Boys as there are 4 band members.
-Legal stuff needed.
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6/10 Top C to top ANice.
-Perhaps use 4 times Skeleton Boys as there are 4 band members.
-Legal stuff needed.
Below is the sheet I was given that contained the feedback:
MEG!!! (I've written in capitals because I need to grab your attention). In terms of feed back the legal guff shouldn't be with the poster bit and the add ZED should be with the poster bit.
ReplyDeleteIn terms of your digipak track listing look at the xx
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_rtmlbJAfEdc/TPPCU_rg_MI/AAAAAAAAAvk/Nj4yrxpxRLU/s1600/the%2Bxx%2Bconventions.jpg
the align everything to one side which is more aesthetically pleasing.
Remember simplicity is key, it might be worth experimenting and just leaving the Skeletons on the cover (though slightly reduced in size). In terms of the ZED on the reverse make sure it is lined up correctly with the barcode. The other panels are your call but perhaps black and white photo mosiac like in the lining for Youth and Yound Manhood by Kings Of Leon.
If you go with the teardrop idea again look at the XX and the covers which feature remixes
http://static.boomkat.com/images/367874/150.jpg
You'll need a far more ineresting effect behind the tear drop, look at In Rainbows by radiohead.